This was a really tough article to read, ya you spell checked it, but god, it just had no flow and it felt like sentences were stretched really had just to fit in your links to other articles. maybe for large, mostly technical articles like this, you should just stick to bullet points and lists. If you still want to have all your links to your other articles, just make a list at the bottom and throw them all in there. That way you can give a little more descriptive link text to an article than just "fucked up", also, it might give the article a little more professional feeling.


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