Indeed. The point of my post was that anyone (you, me, Michael) could spend 5 minutes on a line and make it much better. Anyone else could spend 10 minutes on it and make it even better yet. While I don't expect Michael to spend 5 minutes per sentence, these latest articles look like stream-of-consciousness commentary, and would be improved upon by a second or third revision. Commentary is for blogs and forums. "This" (what I am doing now) is commentary.
To parody that article:
I'd like to see less bad commentary, and more quality articles.
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